Group Pitch

Group PitchGroup Pitch

Created by, Berkan, Naomi and Created by, Berkan, Naomi and FatimaFatima

BriefBrief We will be recording the first 2 minutes of a We will be recording the first 2 minutes of a film. The genre of the film is ‘Teen Drama’. film. The genre of the film is ‘Teen Drama’. We will be editing this film to make it look We will be editing this film to make it look

professional and up to standard. professional and up to standard.

Title of the film can be Title of the film can be

““Positive”Positive”

StorylineStorylineGirl walks down corridorGirl walks down corridor

Flashback of her getting attackedFlashback of her getting attacked

Opens toilet door goes back in timeOpens toilet door goes back in time

Shows full scene on how she got rapedShows full scene on how she got raped

Bell brings her back to realityBell brings her back to reality

Camera zooms into pregnancy test.Camera zooms into pregnancy test.

Enigmas - The title, what she is going to Enigmas - The title, what she is going to do. do.

Shot listShot list

This is a list This is a list of all of the of all of the main shots main shots we will be we will be

doing.doing.

Shot Description of shot Location and props Tick 1 Establishing shot School Front 2 Tracking shot/point of view (girl walking down

corridor)

School corridor

3

(flash back) medium shot (man and girl fighting)

Alley way

4

Tracking shot/point of view (girl walking down corridor. Then a group of girls speak to the main girl) point of view shot

School corridor

5 Medium close up (group of girls. Wondering why she didn’t reply)

School corridor

6

(Flash back) medium close up (man and girl still fighting)

Alley way

7

Tracking shot (girl going towards the toilets and then going into a cubical)

Toilets

8

Close up, over the shoulder (girl opens door)

Toilets

9

(flash back, in the alley way, girl walking with earphones in) front view long shot.

Alley way

10

Tracking shot (of her walking, could be point of view of the ‘man’ also its blurry)

Alley way

11

Long shot (of her walking, then see the man behind her)

Alley way

12

Point of view (of man, right behind the girl, grabs her)

Alley Way

13

Close up (girls face) Alley way

14

Medium shot (of girl and man, girl fighting) Alley way

15

Long shot (girl getting dragged into a corner) Alley way

16 Flash forward, medium close up. ( of girl sitting on toilet)

Toilets

17 Close up (of her face, her crying) Toilets

18 Tilt (of her face to the pregnancy test) Toilets

19 Close up (of pregnancy test) Toilets

20 Close up (of face, crying) Toilets

ScriptScriptHere is a list of Here is a list of the script.the script.

Scene 1(Establishing shot)

Sarah: (walking down corridor) (narrative of her thoughts) Why,how could this happen.

Sarah: (flashback, screaming)

Group girl 1: (walking down corridor, laughing) Hi Sarah, you feeling ok? Sarah: (narrative) oh no why do they have to speak to me.

Group girl 2: (walking past Sarah) what’s her problem?

Sarah: (Flashback, screaming)

Sarah: (going towards the toilets) oh no, maybe they know what happened?

Scene 2 (In the alley way, diagetic music playing)

Man: (man’s point of view, heavy breathing)

(Music stops when man grabs Sarah)

Sarah: (screaming)Stop, leave me alone, help!

Man: (shouts) Shut up.

(School Bell Rings)

Scene 3(Sitting on the toilet)

Sarah: (crying) No, no

(Shows pregnancy test)

Sarah: What am I going to do now?

End of Scene

Unique Selling PointUnique Selling PointOur Unique Selling Point (USP) is the Our Unique Selling Point (USP) is the intriguing storyline which draws the intriguing storyline which draws the audience in from the very beginning audience in from the very beginning of the film. This might relate to many of the film. This might relate to many young teenagers in many ways as it young teenagers in many ways as it

will show real life situations and will show real life situations and attract the targeted audiences attract the targeted audiences

through the use of enigma codes.through the use of enigma codes.

ActorsActors

Sammy = Sammy = RapistRapist

Sarah = SarahSarah = Sarah

A young guy who wants to get revenge from a girl who rejected him in front of all of his mates.

Not so hard working but clever school girl, who mostly happens to be in the wrong place at the wrong times.

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Actors 2Actors 2Costumes/PropsCostumes/Props

The costumes we have chosen is smart dress for our girl The costumes we have chosen is smart dress for our girl character “Sarah”. We chose this because it shows that character “Sarah”. We chose this because it shows that she is a smart school girl, and she was just in the wrong she is a smart school girl, and she was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.place at the wrong time.

The boy character “Sammy” will be wearing dark jeans and The boy character “Sammy” will be wearing dark jeans and a hooded jacket which will represent that his a “Bad” kid a hooded jacket which will represent that his a “Bad” kid who does not care about consequences.who does not care about consequences.

The main props will be using will be a Mp3 and Pregnancy The main props will be using will be a Mp3 and Pregnancy test. test.

LocationLocation

Here are some images of the locations we will be recording at.Here are some images of the locations we will be recording at.


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Target AudienceTarget Audience

Aimed at teenagers, as the can both Aimed at teenagers, as the can both relate to the film and get inspired by relate to the film and get inspired by their life struggles. their life struggles.

QuestionnaireQuestionnaireThe results of our questionnaire shows us that many teenagers that took the questionnaire gave very similar answers. Most of the films they enjoyed included “Kidulthood” and “Twilight”. Audience are similar.

Helped us know what type of films they watched and liked.



SoundSound

Diagetic - Actors can hear.Diagetic - Actors can hear. Non - Diagetic - Actors can’t hear only audience.Non - Diagetic - Actors can’t hear only audience. We have chosen to use Diagetic sound when the girl We have chosen to use Diagetic sound when the girl

character is listening to music with her headphones in character is listening to music with her headphones in her ear.her ear.

Non Diagetic sound when the boy character is creeping Non Diagetic sound when the boy character is creeping up to Sarah from the back to cover her mouth. This up to Sarah from the back to cover her mouth. This type of music will be one from a typical horror movie type of music will be one from a typical horror movie which will cause tension to the audience. which will cause tension to the audience.

Effect ,The mood. Effect ,The mood.

The StoryboardThe StoryboardBelow are some pictures of the story board we created.Below are some pictures of the story board we created.


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GenreGenre

Style and inspiration - In Blog. Style and inspiration - In Blog. Talk about kidulthood , juno Talk about kidulthood , juno Copy and paste blog then talk Copy and paste blog then talk

Production ScheduleProduction ScheduleTaskTask Start DateStart Date End DateEnd Date

Deliver PitchDeliver Pitch 5/2/105/2/10

Film Character Film Character Walking Down Walking Down Corridor.Corridor.

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Film Characters Film Characters Outside.Outside.

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Editing ProcessEditing Process 26/2/1026/2/10 12/3/1012/3/10

Blog Entry 3 - 7Blog Entry 3 - 7 5/2/105/2/10 31/3/1031/3/10

Audience Audience ScreeningScreening

17/3/1017/3/10 17/3/1017/3/10

Final EditFinal Edit 17/3/1017/3/10 19/3/1019/3/10

Evaluation and Evaluation and C/WC/W

19/3/1019/3/10 31/3/1031/3/10

Allocated RolesAllocated Roles

In our group we have allocated roles.

Naomi - Editing

Berkan - Camera Man

Fatima - Director

We will all be choosing what sound we will be going to use.

However these roles might change when we start filming.

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