This is my first draft, I did a gauzier blur in the background to make the foreground clearer. The fonts I used were stencil std and I used komika axis, I used stencil std for my title because I wanted it to stand out and be bold on the page, I used komika axis for the kickers so that they would still stand out but not be as big or bold as the masthead.

This is my second draft of my school magazine. I took into consideration the comments that were given of my first draft to improve my second draft, I decided on a reoccurring theme of pink and black. I created a drop shadow as a back layer on the fonts, which helped to make the writing stand out more and give it another dimension. I kept the same fonts as my first draft as I think they are effective because they stand out and are bold on the page therefore drawing your eye to them straight away.