MUET EXTENDED WRITING

Amirul Hakim Nur FarahinAmir AkmalKanageshwari Jevinya

QUESTION 7 : “HOLDING A PART-TIME JOB WHILE

STUDYING DISTRUPTS A STUDENT’S STUDIES”

WHAT IS YOUR VIEW ? YOU SHOULD WRITE AT LEAST 350 WORDS

In my view, I totally agree with the statement

INTRODUCTION

It is true that youngsters nowadays are independent .

With excuse to gain experience , improve their potential and money to fulfil their desires , they go for a part-time job while studying .

Some people manage to handle both studies and work but most people are not capable to do it .

This is why , I strongly believe that holding a part-time job while studying disrupts a student’s studies .

YES , A PART-TIME JOB CAN BE DISTRUPTING BECAUSE OF,

Stress

Lost focus

Less time to study

FORMAT

Key point Main reason 1 (WHY) Main reason 2 (HOW)

Examples Strong statement

STRESS First and foremost – part time job can disrupts a

student’s studies due to stress . Going to school or class by day and having a

part-time job by night can stress out people especially a student .

Mixing problems at school and working place can cause students to stress

For example :At school – the teachers are pushing on homework , presentations and exams . At working place – the managers or boss are burdening with hardwork , get scolded and tight with regulations o Students who rarely know how to handle their

stress can disrupt their studies’ spirit by the lack of energy .

LOST FOCUS Besides that, a part-time job is disturbing

because it makes students lose their focus in studies .

Having a part-time job can cause student to forget the importance of focusing in studies

Where can they focus on one thing at a time if they had to focus two things at a time .

Take for example , during examination weeks , they are still satisfied with at least excel in exam by instead of they can do better and excel well in exam without having a part-time job .

Most students are blinded by money that cause their focus have turn to their job .

LESS TIME TO STUDY In addition , a part-time job can also disrupts

one’s studies as they have less time to study .

Students do not have extra or even enough time to study and make revision on their own for schools or exams.

Too packed schedules and receiving many tasks at working place and school happens all the time for being a worker and student at the same time

For example , when one’s schedule is too pack they are tired and when they are tired they choose to rest more than doing brainy activities.

So , I can conclude that most students are lack of time management skills .

IN CONCLUSION , I strongly agree with the statement that

holding a part-time job while studying disrupts a student’s studies .

Every student has the right to make their decision on having a part-time job .

However , they also have to consider on a few things about if they are really responsible people and have the capabilities to manage it well by mentally and physically ready .

Only by that , students are allowed to have a part-time job but still are not recommended .