“ I like the idea of the composition; I think that if flows well.”

“I really like the contrast between the colourful image on the bottom and the black and white image on the top.”

“ I think that juxtaposing the image of the girl with the closed eyes with the image of the girl with open eyes really supports the title of the album.”

“The idea reflects the video well- you have established a really strong sense of band identity.”

“I like the idea but in terms of execution there

are some areas which need work.”

“ The bottom image is quite pixelated- you could

do with replacing some colours to fix this- there

are a few really visible blue and red pixels which

makes the image appear grainy”

“The text used for the album title is too small,

and I don’t think that it matches up well with

the font used for the artist’s name. Try to find a

font more similar to that.”

“The strip with the flowers is a bit too bright- it

overpowers the text in front of it.”