Analysis of previous

students work

Jade Rimell

I have analyzed other students research, planning and construction giving what mark I think they deserve based on the criteria's. I did this to learn from their mistakes and to see how I could be inspired by their work in approach to get the best marks possible.

Name: Joel Harvey Mark

Reasons

Research and planning: He explored ideas, characters, costumes, location shots and mood boards.

14 He spelt ‘influences’ wrong but had a clear layout. He used different technology throughout his presentation such as Prezi, photos, YouTube and Blendspace.

Construction: 48 Low level lighting is used throughout as well as freeze frame and other effects. Although there was no close up he used different technology and used clear dialect.

Name: Luke Arkers Mark

Reasons

Research and planning: He backs up writing with evidence.

18 Luke includes lots of detail and has used different technology however he could of neatened out some of his layout.

Construction: 52 Good backing music was used as it represented a heart beat. An over the shoulder shot was used as well as lots of wide, long and establishing shots. As well as this there was a strong clear dialect.

Name: Louise Nicholas

Mark

Reasons

Research and planning: Completed everything to a moderate standard.

12 Not very detailed with little writing in some areas. Not distributed evenly.

Construction: 20 The camera wasn't stable, should of been used with a tripod and the informative writing wasn't up long enough for the audience to read. As well as this the music was too loud and overpowered the whole film.

Name: James Powell Mark

Reasons

Research and planning: Very clear and informative planning and research.

19 Used different technology throughout and was very detailed. All the information in the research and planning was very good but the props presentation and information was bad in comparison to the rest of his work.

Construction: 49 The scene changed with the bell (parallel sound) which shows thought in techniques as well as low level lighting and different shot types.