Script Draft 1

Location Video Audio Time

Studio Name Vanity Logo 00:00:04

Company Production Vanity Logo 00:00:04

Wallington ShopsExterior(Daytime)

Mark (25) is dressed in a red checked shirt and jeans. He is on his way home. He walks past a male retail shop, but does not attempt to look through the window.

Natural diegetic background sounds 00:00:04

As Mark approaches a female retail shop, he stops and gazes through the window.

Natural diegetic background sounds 00:00:10

Public Bench in WallingtonExterior(Daytime)

A woman (23) dressed casually, is sitting on a public bench, reading a feminine magazine.

Natural diegetic background sounds 00:00:04

The woman’s mobile phone interrupts her reading.

She places the magazine on the bench, as she begins to speak on her mobile.

Natural diegetic background sounds, mobile ringing tone.

A muffled conversation between the woman and her caller.

“Hi, Yes I can make it, what time should I meet you?”

00:00:04

The woman stands up and begins to walk away from the bench, still conversing on her mobile phone. She forgets to take her magazine with her.

Natural diegetic background sounds and a continuation of a muffled conversation between the woman and her caller that will fade as she exits the frame.

“Yes, I can make that, if I leave now. Do you know the time for the last train home?”

00:00:04

Mark walks towards the bench, noticing the magazine.

Introduction of non-diegetic soft mood music

00:00:03

Mark looks around the bench scene, before lifting up the magazine. He then opens it up and begins to flick through the pages.

Continuation of the non-diegetic soft mood music

00:00:04

Dylan (25) dressed casually, is in the background, walking towards Mark.

Continuation of the non-diegetic soft mood music

00:00:02

Dylan is now at the bench

Dylan interrupts Mark reading the magazine.

Mark acting surprised, but embarrassed, quickly rolls up the magazine and hides it behind his back. Dylan, has not noticed the genre of the magazine and continues to embark on with the conversation

Mark responses nervously

Dylan, casually responds

Mark hastily replies, shakes Dylan’s hand and starts to walk away in the opposite direction, still trying to conceal the magazine.

Music fades and diegetic background sounds are introduced.

“Hi Mark, how’s it going mate?

“Oh ...hi Dylan, Ok thanks and you?”

“Looking forward to tomorrow, when we take on those Banstead lot? Should be a good game.”

“Yeah, but I don’t mind being the sub!”

“You’re always the sub mate; you should let someone else take the bench. Do you fancy a pint?”

“Sorry mate, another time. See you tomorrow.”

00:00:20

Headley Avenue,Wallington. Exterior and

Mark opens his front door and enters his house.

Diegetic key sound 00:00:03

Interior(Daytime) Mark closes the door.

He walks up the stairs, now flicking through the magazine.

Diegetic door sound

Diegetic footstep sound and rustling of magazine pages.

00:00:05

Headley Avenue,Wallington.Bedroom Interior(Daytime)

Mark walks into his bedroom and closes the door.

He places the magazine on his desk and pulls his bedroom curtains.

Diegetic sound of footsteps and door closing.

Natural diegetic sounds of the magazine being placed on the desk and the curtains being pulled.

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Mark lifts the bed up and retrieves a carrier bag.

He opens the bag and pulls out a dress.

Non diegetic mood music commences.

Non diegetic mood music continues.

00:00:05

Mark takes his clothes off. (Only selected close up shots will be selected. For example top of shoulder/ lower bare leg.

He puts on the dress(Again, only dignified close up shots are to be selected)

Non diegetic mood music continues.

Non diegetic mood music continues.

00:00:15

Mark then turns to look at himself in the mirror and it reflects him looking quite satisfied.

Non diegetic mood music fades. 00:00:05

Mark suddenly hears his front door slam shut and immediately turns away from the mirror.

Diegetic sound of thefront door slamming.

00:00:02

Film title appears over Mark in the final frame and then all fades away slowly.

00:00:04

Total calculated time for introduction 107 seconds ( One minute, forty-seven seconds), allowing me to have an extra thirteen seconds to increase any unrealistic timing issue.