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Languag e Content Style Proof read: Spelling/Grammar/Punctua tion Headlines Use of alliter ation rocky road There is also a used a rhetori cal questio n as well as a methapo r with “Will the South rise again?” Other than that there is not much The story is about the London Broncos in rugby its use is to inform the public about what is going on this articl e Is more formal with its questi on and awnser but it is also done in a chatty way rugby - no full stop at the end A. I feel after coaching in super league and coaching the national team I can bring experience to a club who has been almost revolutionised in the way of results, I think I can help cement the winning mentality that surrounds this place at the moment.- needed a quotation mark “the club has finally settled in one place it is and we can start spreading the message about rugby league in a city that is largely dominated by other sports football and our cross code rivals.- no end quotation The Broncos have taken a leaf out of their close neighbours book the London Skolars and settled down in one location and then really start to branch out into the community and start to recruit closer to home and more importantly have been doing and not sell them on to make a profit, but to keep hold of them and * What kind of headline is it? What techniques are used? (Pun/Alliteration/ Informal language etc) Will the South rise again?” Alliteration Formal Rhetorical question

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Headlines

Use of alliteration rocky road

There is also a used a rhetorical question as well as a methapor with “Will the South rise again?”

Other than that there is not much

The story is about the London Broncos in rugby its use is to inform the public about what is going on

this article Is more formal with its question and awnser but it is also done in a chatty way

rugby - no full stop at the end

A. I feel after coaching in super league and coaching the national team I can bring experience to a club who has been almost revolutionised in the way of results, I think I can help cement the winning mentality that surrounds this place at the moment.- needed a quotation mark

“the club has finally settled in one place it is and we can start spreading the message about rugby league in a city that is largely dominated by other sports football and our cross code rivals.- no end quotation

The Broncos have taken a leaf out of their close neighbours book the London Skolars and settled down in one location and then really start to branch out into the community and start to recruit closer to home and more importantly have been doing and not sell them on to make a profit, but to keep hold of them and start to build a team of home grown southern players and get London back challenging for Super League spots.- needs some full stops

* What kind of headline

is it? What techniques are used? (Pun/Alliteration/Informal language etc)

Will the South rise again?”

Alliteration

Formal

Rhetorical question