10.13 Eng101FA15 PeerReview ComparativeAnalyses Apostrophes Whowhom

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Eng101_FA15APOSTROPHES

WHO/WHOM

PEER REVIEW COMPARATIVE ANALYSIS


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Apostrophe

Only 2 uses1. ownership

2. omission


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Apostrophe Ownership

Use possessive nouns to show that someone ownsomething

◦That is the nose of Mary.

◦That is Mary’s nose.

◦Those are the toes of Gary.◦Those are Gary’s toes.


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Use posessive nouns to show that someone owns◦Moses’ tablets

◦ Achilles’ heel

◦ Jesus’ parables or Jesus’s parables


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If 2 people own the same thing, use an apostrophthe second person

◦The marriage of Jim and Mimi

◦ Jim and Mimi’s marriage

◦The father of Kate and Meg◦Kate and Meg’s father


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If the noun is already plural (boys) just add an apo◦One boy and one car

◦The boy’s car

◦Two boys and two cars

◦The boys’ cars


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Apostrophe Omission

Use an apostrophe to indicate missing letters or n◦10 o’clock

◦‘93

◦Let’s

◦It’s


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Apostrophe Omission

Use an apostrophe to indicate missing letters or n◦Both boy’s and girl’s are invited to try out for the

team.

◦Tomato’s are for sale.

◦I grew up in the 1990’s.◦There are three 9’s on this page.


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Apostrophe Omission

The rule about letters and apostrophes...◦Mississippi is spelled with four s’s, four I’s, and tw


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Who VS Whom


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Who vs. Whom

I love you.

Subject is the person doing somethingI am performing the love; therefore I am the subject

Object is having something done to them

You are the object of my affection


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Who vs. Whom

Use who when referring to the subject of a clause

Who loves you?

I think it was Thomas Jefferson who was the third presidentthe United States.

Use whom when referring to the object of a clause

Whom do you love?

Mrs. Dimwit consulted an astrologer whom she met in Seat(She met him in Seattle.)


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Who vs. Whom

He/Him trick

Him and whom both end with the letter m

When trying to choose between who or whom, ask if theanswer to the question would be he or him

Who (or whom) do you love?

Answer is I love him, so whom is correct

Who (or whom) broke his heart ?

Answer is She broke his heart , so who is correct


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Who vs. Whom Practice

1. Joe is the chef (who/whom) cooked that fabulous stir fry.

Who

2. (Who/Whom) is that for?

Whom

3. Joyce is the girl (who/whom) got the job.

Who

4. I decided to vote for (whoever/whomever) called me first.

Whoever5. Into the dark apartment walked David, (who/whom) we nearly killed withsurprise when everyone shouted “Happy Birthday” and jumped from behinfurniture.

Whom


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Who vs. Whom Extra Practice

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The good doctor’s newsletters...

RememberPossession

Omission

Who if next word is a verb

Whom if next word is not a verb


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Comparative Analyses


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Discuss sample essay

Decide the criteria for a good comparative an

Rate essays from best to worst

Write order on board


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ach body paragraph should…

* Identify element (topic sentence)

* summarize part of essay illustrating that element

* give direct text from essay (quote)

* Explain how this example shows the element’s effectiven

* summarize part of essay illustrating that element

* give direct text from essay (quote)

* Explain how this example shows the element’s effectiven

* Revisit identification of element (concluding sentence)


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Works Cited page

A Work in an Anthology, Reference, or Collection

Works may include an essay in an edited collection or anthology, or a chapterbasic form is for this sort of citation is as follows:

Lastname, First name. "Title of Essay." Title of Collection. Ed. Editor's Name(s

Publication: Publisher, Year. Page range of entry. Medium of Publicatio


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Peer Review Comparative Analysi

On peer review sheet, write

Reviewed by: (insert your name)

Summary author: (peer’s name)

Exchange essays.

Read the essay and complete the peer review sheet.Give both to author (your peer).


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For Thursday…

Read Chapter 14 (causal [pgs 232-246])

DUE DATE CHANGE!!!

Comparative Analysis essay due Tuesday, October 20

Order of materials for submission –

rubric, final copy, prewrite (freewrite done in class, notes owritten for homework and class discussions), plan (outline)peer review

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