SectionSection StrengthsStrengths WeaknessesWeaknesses MarkMarkPlanning & Planning & ResearchResearch

Analysed past social realism films. Used methods of planning her work. Script planned well and a Animatic storyboard.

Could have used images to support her research and planning. 14 out of

20.

ConstructionConstruction Shots and editing has been done quite well. Music helps the situation and keeps it with the realism as it is filmed on real location. POV shots are used well.

Could hear echo’s throughout. 38 out of 60.

EvaluationEvaluation Used conventions and audience in evaluation and explained it well. Also went into detail of what equipment was used.

Could have explained in more detail about each area. 12 out of

20.

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Total = 64/100

SectionSection StrengthsStrengths WeaknessesWeaknesses MarkMarkPlanning & Planning & ResearchResearch

Beachcombing used and added videos and pictures to show it.Gone into detail by researching how she could bring her ideas together. A lot of information with pictures and videos.

Not a lot of research on her potential target audience. Also not a lot of actors and location explained as part of her researching and planning.

15 out of 20.

ConstructionConstruction Realism to the narrative.Protest footage was good in it being a major part to the narrative and again shows the gritty British ness. The dialogue shows that it is set in an urban area.Voiceover used to explain narrative.

Typical narrative of main character waking up in the morning. 45 out of

60.

EvaluationEvaluation Explained in detail about her potential audience and technology. Shows understanding of the task.

Could have used her ICT skills a bit more to make it look more appealing by adding videos and pictures to support what you are making as a point.

18 out of 20.

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Total = 78/100