Feedback of First Draft

Negative Feedback of First Draft

Make ‘FRESH’ bold as it is the magazine title

Check grammar and correct itMake larger

Positive Feedback of First Draft

The setting out of this is professional and looks attractive

The colours match the front cover

The background is nice and plain making model stand out

Title very catchy

Caption is catchy and stands out

From looking at the feedback there is a lot to improve I will start by:• Reading through my article and correcting any spelling mistakes and grammar• I will make my caption 36pt• I will make sure ‘FRESH’ is bold