Script to screen OGR2

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Vikki Kerslake

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Scene 1. Ext. London. Day.

wide establishing shot of a street of shops in London, a familiar build-

ing, tower of London, can be seen in the distance. Camera Zooms in to-

wards a shop wall, where we see a Wanted poster with the main charac-

ter, BONNIE REED on it. Camera pans 90 degrees to face the road, and wesee BONNIE storming down the road.

2. BONNIE Picks up a bottle from the floor, and sees that it is empty,

and throws it away. She pulls out her gun and looks up at a shop in

front of her; the wooden sign reads Jacobs Wine Cellar. She walks

into the shop.

3.Int. Wine Merchants shop. Continuous

A wine Merchant is walking out of a wine cellar over to the cashiers

desk. BONNIE stands and aims her gun at the wine merchant. The camera

zooms towards him, where he drops the boxes and puts his hands up. Cam-

era zooms out to show BONNIE walk into the cellar.

4.INT. Cellar. Continuous

BONNIE walks down the stairs. We see an overhead shot of the room, show-

ing the many barrels of wine in the room.

FADE OUT

FADE IN. 5. Continuous

WE fade in to see BONNIE sitting on the floor in a drunken manner,

pointing her gun at the door whilst finishing off a bottle. She throws

it down, into a pile of wine bottles on the floor next to her. She loses

her grip of the gun also, and drops her head. Camera Zooms to a close up

shot of her face. Her eyes roll, and she shuts her eyes.

previously. BONNIE stands up, and takes a few steps forward.


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6.Camera faces BONNIE. She reaches out towards the camera. Below her feet,

the ground opens up. She looks down, where a shovel is next to the hole.

BONNIE falls through the hole.

Cut to Black

7.Cut back to scene, where we see BONNIE close up. Camera Zooms out to show

she is balanced upon a very large wooden platform. The platform moves in asimilar way to a seesaw. On the other end, is a smaller hangmans platform

with a noose dangling from it. Her wanted poster is stuck to it. This end

of the platform tips down, causing BONNIE to slide towards it.

8.Camera cuts to a mid-shot of BONNIE. A large shovel falls into the wood

behind her, causing her to fling her arms from fright.

9.The Shovel is pulled out from the wood, by a giant silhouetted figure.

Camera zooms out to show the silhouetted GRAVEDIGGER character. The plat-

form drops into the ground, leaving BONNIE falling down and directly into a

hole in the ground. The hole is shaped like a grave. Camera follows her as

she falls through. She stands up, and looks up.

10.Cut to BONNIES perspective, where we see the GRAVEDIGGER begins to fill

the grave by shoveling dirt into the hole.

11.Camera cuts back to reveal her expression; mouth opened wide and hands

on face.

12.Cut back to: Bonnies perspective. One last shovel of dirt is dropped

onto the camera.

Cut to black

13. INT. CELLAR. Continuous

BONNIE wakes up from her previous state, where she was sitting in the cel-

lar. She looks around, and we see her realise that it was merely a dream.

She picks up her gun, and throws it across the room.

Fade to: INT. Wine merchants shop. Evening

Bonnie walks out of the cellar with her head hanging down. She walks over

to the cashiers desk where the merchant has now left (hidden). She reaches

into her pocket and places a few coins onto the counter.

Camera cuts to behind Bonnie, where we see her walk towards the shop door,

sunset light peering through.

Fade to white.


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Creative Partnership continuedAnass:

Numbers 1 and 3 look interesting to me as compositions

I love these, the mark making rlly nice Vikki

Me:

the silhouettes really show how your characters emotions,

especially like those drawings on page 1, (i like the 6th one

the best !) keep it up :)

these are cool, number 2 kind of reminds me of pyramidhead :) keep it up
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