How to Improve your Grant Proposal
Assessment, revisions, etc.
Thomas S. Buchanan
Afterwards: the Summary Statement
Study section, roster
Score, percentile
Budget recommendations
Summary of the discussion
Reviewers’ critiques
The Critique
For R and P grants (e.g., R03, P01), the five scored criteria for research grant applications are Significance, Investigator(s), Innovation, Approach, and Environment.
Other grant types have different scored criteria (e.g., K, F, T and S awards)
The final score for any grant is based on overall impact.
Overall Impact (R & P awards)
“Reviewers will provide an overall impact score to reflect their assessment of the likelihood for the project to exert a sustained, powerful influence on the research field(s) involved, in consideration of the following five core review criteria, and additional review criteria (as applicable for the project proposed)”
1. Significance
“Does the project address an important problem or a critical barrier to progress in the field? If the aims of the project are achieved, how will scientific knowledge, technical capability, and/or clinical practice be improved? How will successful completion of the aims change the concepts, methods, technologies, treatments, services, or preventative interventions that drive this field?”
1. Significance
“Does the project address an important problem or a critical barrier to progress in the field? If the aims of the project are achieved, how will scientific knowledge, technical capability, and/or clinical practice be improved? How will successful completion of the aims change the concepts, methods, technologies, treatments, services, or preventative interventions that drive this field?”
2. Investigators(s)
“Are the PD/PIs, collaborators, and other researchers well suited to the project? If Early Stage Investigators or New Investigators, do they have appropriate experience and training? If established, have they demonstrated an ongoing record of accomplishments that have advanced their field(s)? If the project is collaborative or multi-PD/PI, do the investigators have complementary and integrated expertise; are their leadership approach, governance and organizational structure appropriate for the project?”
3. Innovation
“Does the application challenge and seek to shift current research or clinical practice paradigms by utilizing novel theoretical concepts, approaches or methodologies, instrumentation, or interventions? Are the concepts, approaches or methodologies, instrumentation, or interventions novel to one field of research or novel in a broad sense? Is a refinement, improvement, or new application of theoretical concepts, approaches or methodologies, instrumentation, or interventions proposed?”
3. Innovation
“Does the application challenge and seek to shift current research or clinical practice paradigms by utilizing novel theoretical concepts, approaches or methodologies, instrumentation, or interventions? Are the concepts, approaches or methodologies, instrumentation, or interventions novel to one field of research or novel in a broad sense? Is a refinement, improvement, or new application of theoretical concepts, approaches or methodologies, instrumentation, or interventions proposed?”
4. Approach (1 of 2)
“Are the overall strategy, methodology, and analyses well-reasoned and appropriate to accomplish the specific aims of the project? Are potential problems, alternative strategies, and benchmarks for success presented? If the project is in the early stages of development, will the strategy establish feasibility and will particularly risky aspects be managed?”
4. Approach (1 of 2)
“Are the overall strategy, methodology, and analyses well-reasoned and appropriate to accomplish the specific aims of the project? Are potential problems, alternative strategies, and benchmarks for success presented? If the project is in the early stages of development, will the strategy establish feasibility and will particularly risky aspects be managed?”
4. Approach (2 of 2)
“If the project involves clinical research, are the plans for 1) protection of human subjects from research risks, and 2) inclusion of minorities and members of both sexes/genders, as well as the inclusion of children, justified in terms of the scientific goals and research strategy proposed?”
5. Enviornment
“Will the scientific environment in which the work will be done contribute to the probability of success? Are the institutional support, equipment and other physical resources available to the investigators adequate for the project proposed? Will the project benefit from unique features of the scientific environment, subject populations, or collaborative arrangements?”
5. Enviornment
“Will the scientific environment in which the work will be done contribute to the probability of success? Are the institutional support, equipment and other physical resources available to the investigators adequate for the project proposed? Will the project benefit from unique features of the scientific environment, subject populations, or collaborative arrangements?”
Additional Review Criteria
These additional criteria can influence reviewers’ enthusiasm:• Protection of Human Subjects• Inclusion of Women, Minorities & Children• Vertebrate Animals• Biohazards• Budget• Resource Sharing Plan (Data Sharing Plan,
Sharing Model Organisms, & Genome Wide Associate Studies) Probably won’t need
this
Afterwards: the Revision
Carefully analyze the critiqueswhat was uniformly disliked
what should be changed vs. re-explained
what additional data could be provided
Are there words of encouragement embedded in the criticisms?
Are significant strengths mentioned?
“... above average enthusiasm…”
Afterwards: the Revision
If the chances for successfully addressing the criticisms seem good, revise
Begin with “Introduction” addressing reviewers’ criticisms
be gracious, respond positively
you may or may not get the same reviewers, but your attitude and effort to respond will be appreciated
Afterwards: the Revision
You used to get only 1 chance to revise; after that you had to submit a “different” proposal
Under current rules, you may revise and resubmit as many times as you please
if you were close to the funding cutoff, this may increase your odds of success
of course, reviewers may get annoyed
Summary: the “do’s”
Good idea, science, and applicationMechanistic, testable hypothesesConvincing, appropriate preliminary dataDetailed research plan, based on statistical planningWrite clearly, state your case as rationally and convincingly as possibleRevise repeatedly before submission
Summary: the “don’ts”
Not too simple, not too ambitiousthe problem must be significant
10 hypotheses is probably too many!
Avoid sloppy writinguse spell checker, check your grammar
Don’t make unsupported statements
Don’t wait until the last minute; it shows!
Sample Summary Statements
Courtesy of Hank Donahue
Go here!
NIH Peer Review Revealed
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fBDxI6l4dOA