Peer Editing Overview Presentation

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<ul><li> 1. Peer Editing Awesomeness Your Guide to Becoming a Super Sweet Editor using Hylands Three Step Program For Awesome EditingELA 7 Adapted from Read-Write-Think 2004. IRA/NCTE. http:/ /www.readwritethink.org/classroom-resources/lesson-plans/peer-edit-with-perfection-786.html Sunday, 17 November, 131</li></ul> <p> 2. Goal By the end of today, you should be confident in your abilities to edit your own writing and the writing of others.Sunday, 17 November, 132 3. What is Editing? Making suggestions, comments, compliments, and changes to writing Working solo or with someone else your own age (peer)Sunday, 17 November, 133 4. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H foHylands Three Step Program for Awesome Editing Sunday, 17 November, 134 5. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H foStay positive!1. Compliments 2. Suggestions 3. CorrectionsSunday, 17 November, 135 6. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H foStay positive!1. Compliments 2. Suggestions 3. CorrectionsSunday, 17 November, 136 7. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H fo1. ComplimentsStart your editing with compliments Explain what the writer did well: I liked your topic because... You used a lot of good details, like... I like when you used words like... My favourite part was...because... I liked the way you... Sunday, 17 November, 137 8. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H fo1. ComplimentsRead the paragraph on the next slide. Record THREE compliments about the paragraph that you would tell the author if you were editing this paragraph.Sunday, 17 November, 138 9. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H fo1. ComplimentsWe were all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and rile he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldnt believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him. Sunday, 17 November, 139 10. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H foStay positive!1. Compliments 2. Suggestions 3. CorrectionsSunday, 17 November, 1310 11. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H fo2. SuggestionsGiving the author SPECIFIC ideas on how to make their writing better.Be Specific. Be Helpful. Be Kind. Try to give suggestions on how to improve, rather than point out whats isnt good. Instead of It didnt make sense, say, If you add more details after this sentence, it would be more clear. Instead of Your word choice was boring, say Instead of using good, try the word exceptional. Sunday, 17 November, 1311 12. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H fo2. SuggestionsPossible areas for suggestion:Word Choice - Did the author choose interesting words? Details - Is there a lot of detail? (ex: seeing, hearing, touching, tasting, smelling) Organization - Can you understand what the author is trying to say? Is the story told in the right order? Sentences - Are they too long or too short? Topic - Does the author stick to the topic/story, or are there things that dont really fit? Sunday, 17 November, 1312 13. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H fo2. SuggestionsRead the paragraph again. Record THREE suggestions about the paragraph that you give tell the author if you were editing this paragraph.Sunday, 17 November, 1313 14. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H fo2. SuggestionsWe were all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and rile he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldnt believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him. Sunday, 17 November, 1314 15. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H foStay positive!1. Compliments 2. Suggestions 3. CorrectionsSunday, 17 November, 1315 16. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H fo3. CorrectionsCorrections include checking your paper, or your peers paper for: Spelling mistakes Grammar mistakes Missing punctuation Incomplete or run-on sentencesSunday, 17 November, 1316 17. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H fo3. CorrectionsRead the paragraph one last time. Circle, underline or use editing marks to correct errors in spelling, punctuation, or grammar.Sunday, 17 November, 1317 18. g ram Pro te p t i n g e e S Edi Th r ome n ds we s yla r A H fo3. CorrectionsWe were all over my aunts house when my dog Riley was running around like crazy. He was chasing me around in circles. all of a suden I look and rile he was in the pool! swimming in my aunts pool. I couldnt believe my eyes that the dog was in the pool. I dashed to the pool and jumpd in and swan over to Riley and pulled him to the steps. He got out and shook all over us like a sprinkler on a hot day. I was glad riley was o.k. and that I saved him. Sunday, 17 November, 1318 19. Remember Give GOOD feedback. Be Specific. Be Helpful. Be Kind. Give the type of feedback that you would like to receive. Complete all three steps: Compliments, suggestions, &amp; corrections.Adapted from Read-Write-Think 2004. IRA/NCTE. http:/ /www.readwritethink.org/classroom-resources/lesson-plans/peer-edit-with-perfection-786.html Sunday, 17 November, 1319</p>