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The band that wasn’t

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Write a short passage to introduce your favorite singer or band or something else to us? 初步掌握阅读技巧、技能 ;

从阅读中提取写作素材、运用写作技巧

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捕捉信息、提炼技巧

What does the title “ The band that wasn’t ” want to tell us?

What's a best title like?

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♫simple - easy to understandAccurate - express fully and correctlyComplete -include the main information New - fashionable, attractive and interesting

捕捉信息、提炼技巧

Divide the passage into two parts and find out the topic sentence in each part.

Part1 (para1-2) But just how do people form a band?Part2 (para3-4) However, there was one band that started in a different way.

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写主题句应注意以下几点： ① 归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 ② 提炼出一句具有概括性的话 ③ 主题句应具有可读性，吸引读者。

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? ? ? ... But just how do people form a band ?

What do you think of the beginning?

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By question asking to introduce the topic

How did the writer introduce the topic?

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Why are the names of Song Zuying and Liu Huan mentioned in P1? A. Because they are very famous. B. Because they can sing very well. C. Because the text wants us to know them. D. Because the text is giving us some examples of the famous singers that we might want to be like.

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D. Because the text is giving us some examples of the famous singers that we might want to be like.

Part1

常用于举例的连接词有： for example (instance), one example is, besides, furthermore, moreover, in addition…

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Usually speaking, how do people form a band?

Step 1 to practise music at home

Step 2 to play in the street or subway

Step 3 to give performances in pubs or clubs

Step 4 to make records in a studio

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Part1

捕捉信息、提炼技巧 Part 2

Find the sentence" However, after a year or so in which they became more serious bout their work, the Monkees starte to play and sing their own songs like a real band."

in Para. 3&4

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捕捉信息、提炼技巧 Part 2

How did the Monkees develop ？ Put the steps in the right order.♫

常用于叙述法中的连接词有： first, at the beginning, to start with, after that, later, then, afterwards, in the end, finally…

1.Broke up, then reunited.2.Produced their own records.3.Produced a new record.4.Relied on other musicians.5.Sang their own songs.6.Sang songs by others.7.Pretended to sing.

The band that wasn't

The band thatis

4. Relied on other musicians.7. Pretended to sing.5. Sang songs by others.

6. Sang their own songs.2. Produced their own records.1. Broke up, then reunited.3. Produced a new record.

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Find the word that help compare the Monkees with a common band.

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常用于对比、转折的连接词有： however, on the other hand, in contrast, but, whereas, nevertheless, on the other hand, while, instead, on the contrary, compared with …

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What's the end of the Monkees?

It says Hello to the title.

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♫From the Monkees’ development, what canyou learn?

No pains, no gains.Nobody can casually succeed. Only by hard working can you realize your dream.

实际运用、自我提升

Finish your introduction with the information, key words, using some of the writing skills.

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best title best title topic sentencetopic sentenceattractive beginning attractive beginning examplesexamplesnarrationnarrationcomparison & contrastcomparison & contrast

My introductionMy introduction

A swan that wasn't Have you ever seen the film Titanic? Have you been so crazy about the song My heart will go on? Have you dreamt of singing such a beautiful and soulful song? Do you know who sang the song best known to the world? A singer who attached diligence and good qualities to great success as a singer and wife. But just how a singer achieve sussess. Singers learnt to sing at a very early age and tried to hunt for chances to become famous. They may start from going to different after-school classes who were accompanied or forced by their parents. Sometimes they may show themselves in school activities or family parties. Later they may try their best to compete in Good Voice of China, etc. at the cost of a large sum of money earned by their by their parents. Of course they hope they can become famous overnight. It's a pity that some should take drugs or lose their steady family after success, like Michael Jackson.

question asking to offer topic

development of a common singer

A swan that wasn't However, there was a singer that started in a different way. She was called Celion Dion, a Canadian singer , born to a large family who are fond of music. She grew up singing in her parents' small piano bar . Later she learnt to sing from music manager René Angélil, who was moved to tears by Dion's voice. To realize her dream, she has lost her adolescence. In return she won different prizes. Nevertheless, she was critized for her kind of ugly appearance and nonstandard language. Dion receded from the spotlight and was sent to polish her English,after which marked the start of her English-language music career finally to be world famous. In 1999 at the height of her success, Dion announced a temporary retirement from entertainment in order to start a family and spend time with her husband, who was diagnosed with cancer. She was a real swan keeping to her dream and responsibility.

development of Celion Dion

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Homework: Exchange your introduction with your partner and improve his / hers.

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Thank you!