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    About me

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    OpinionIn some countries, many

    the past. Do you think thi

    In recent years it has beco

    large cities in the develop

    and negative consequenc

     The rise in one-person h

    broader economic reason

    may become more inde

    members. A young adult

    clean, pay bills and mana

    increase in the number

    development. From an e

    result in greater demand f

    estate agents and a whol

    their products or services.

    However, the personal an

    the opposite angle. Firstly,

    people who live alone ma

    miss out on the emotional

    provide, and they must b

    this sense, perhaps the tr

    the financial point of view

    ssaysore people are choosing to live alon

    is a positive or negative development 

      me far more normal for people to live

    d world. In my opinion, this trend coul

    s in equal measure.

    useholds can be seen as positive for

    s. On an individual level, people who

    endent and self-reliant than those w

    who lives alone, for example, will ne

    e his or her budget, all of which are v

    of such individuals can certainly be

    conomic perspective, the trend towar

    r housing. This is likely to benefit the c

    host of other companies that rely on

    economic arguments given above can

    rather than the positive feeling of incre

    experience feelings of loneliness, isola

    support and daily conversation that fa

    ar the weight of all household bills an

    nd towards living alone is a negative

    , a rise in demand for housing is likely

    nowadays than in

    lone, particularly in

    have both positive

    both personal and

    hoose to live alone

    ho live with family

    d to learn to cook,

    aluable life skills; an

    seen as a positive

    ds living alone will

    nstruction industry,

    omeowners to buy

    be considered from

    ased independence,

    ion and worry. They

    ily or flatmates can

    d responsibilities; in

    ne. Secondly, from

    o push up property

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    prices and rents. While t

    including those who live al

    In conclusion, the increas

    detrimental effects on indi

    (306 words-band 9)

    is may benefit some businesses, the

    one, will be faced with rising living cost

      e in one-person households will have

    viduals and on the economy.

    general population,

    .

    both beneficial and

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    Some people who have

    argued that these are th

    committing

    To what extent do you ag

    It is true that ex-prisone

    completely agree with the

    their experiences is the be

    In my opinion, teenagersspeak from experience. R

    became involved in crime,

    really like. They can also

    leading glamorous lives.

    by older people, I imagin

    stories of an ex-offender.

    likely to have a powerful i

     The alternatives to using r

    be much less effective. On

    to young people. This coul

    to lawbreakers when the

    advice from figures of au

    speak to their students ab

    credible sources of infor

    informative, but there wo

    questions.

    In conclusion, I fully supp

    after serving a prison sent

    een in prison become good citizens l

    e best people to talk to teenagers ab

    a

    ee or disagree?  

    s can become normal, productive m

    idea that allowing such people to spea

    t way to discourage them from breakin

    are more likely to accept advice fromformed offenders can tell young peo

    the dangers of a criminal lifestyle, and

    dispel any ideas that teenagers may h

    hile adolescents are often indifferent to

    that most of them would be extrem

     The vivid and perhaps shocking natur

    pact.

    eformed criminals to educate teenager

    e option would be for police officers to

    d be useful in terms of informing teens

    are caught, but young people are oft

    thority. A second option would be fo

    out crime, but I doubt that students w

    ation about this topic. Finally, educati

    ld be no opportunity for young peopl

    rt the view that people who have turn

    nce could help to deter teenagers from

    ter, and it is often

    out the dangers of

    crime. 

    mbers of society. I

    to teenagers about

    the law.

    someone who canle about how they

    what life in prison is

    ave about criminals

    the guidance given

    ly keen to hear the

    e of these stories is

    about crime would

    isit schools and talk

    bout what happens

    n reluctant to take

    school teachers to

    uld see teachers as

    onal films might be

    to interact and ask

    d their lives around

    committing crimes.

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    (287 words, band 9)

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    The older generations te

    live, think and behave.

    helpful in prepari

    To what extent do you ag

    It is true that many old

    incompatible with the ne

    ideas are outdated, I belie

    On the one hand, many oless relevant for younger

    learn a profession and find

    variety and diversity fro

    relationships are being er

    and when to marry. But p

    be seen in their attitude

    women, as breadwinners

    appropriate by most youn

    On the other hand, some

    modern world. For exam

    hard, doing one’s best, an

    benefit young people

    characteristics that are pe

    In our globalised world, y

    from a huge variety of bac

    with respect. Finally, I beli

    more ‘old-fashioned’ sens

    d to have very traditional ideas about

    owever, some people believe that t

    g younger generations for

    ee or disagree with this view?  

    er people believe in traditional valu

    ds of younger people. While I agree t

    e that others are still useful and should

    the ideas that elderly people have abopeople. In the past, for example, peo

    a secure job for life, but today’s worker

    m their careers. At the same time,

    oded as young adults make their own

    erhaps the greatest disparity between

    towards gender roles. The traditiona

    and housewives, are no longer accep

    er people.

    traditional views and values are certai

    le, older generations attach great im

    taking pride in one’s work, and these b

    s they enter today’s competitive

    haps seen as traditional are politeness

    oung adults can expect to come into

    kgrounds, and it is more important than

    ve that young people would lead happi

    of community and neighbourliness.

    how people should

    hese ideas are not

    modern life. 

    s that often seem

    at some traditional

    ot be forgotten.

    ut life are becomingle were advised to

    expect much more

    the ‘rules’ around

    choices about who

    he generations can

    l roles of men and

    ed as necessary or

    ly applicable to the

    ortance to working

    ehaviours can surely

    ob market. Other

    and good manners.

    ontact with people

    ever to treat others

    er lives if they had a

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    In conclusion, although th

    today’s world, we should n

    (299 words, band 9)

    e views of older people may sometime

    ot dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelev

      s seem unhelpful in

    nt.

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    Wild animals have no pl

    resources. To what extent

    Some people argue that

    animals because we hum

    point of view.

    In my opinion, it is absu

    century. I do not believe t

    there is nothing special ahave the right to allow or

    is no compelling reason w

    or destroy every last squ

    world’s population. There

    animals, and this should b

    I also disagree with the ide

    the protection of natural

    scientists agree that thes

    rainforests produce oxyge

    we destroyed these areas,

    would far outweigh the c

    habitats, we maintain the

    In conclusion, we have n

    and I believe that we shoul

    (269 words, band 9)

    ce in the 21st century, so protecting

    do you agree or disagree?  

    it is pointless to spend money on th

    ns have no need for them. I completel

    rd to argue that wild animals have n

    hat planet Earth exists only for the ben

    bout this particular century that meanncourage the extinction of any species

    hy we should let animals die out. We d

    are metre of land in order to feed o

    is plenty of room for us to exist sid

    our aim.

    a that protecting animals is a waste of r

      abitats that ensures the survival of wil

    habitats are also crucial for human su

    n, absorb carbon dioxide and stabilise t

    the costs of managing the resulting ch

    osts of conservation. By protecting wil

    atural balance of all life on Earth.

    right to decide whether or not wild a

    d do everything we can to protect them

     

    them is a waste of

    protection of wild

    y disagree with this

    place in the 21st

    efit of humans, and

    s that we suddenly. Furthermore, there

    not need to exploit

    accommodate the

    by side with wild

    sources. It is usually

    animals, and most

    rvival. For example,

    he Earth’s climate. If

    anges to our planet

    d animals and their

    nimals should exist,

    .

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    Families who send their

    taxes that su

    To what extent do you ag

    Some people believe that

    need to contribute to sta

    with this view.

    For a variety of reasons, i

    private education. Firstly,reduction for these famili

    process. Secondly, we all

    not use. For example, mos

    or fire brigade at any time

    this. Finally, if wealthy fa

    private schools, we might

    the rich.

    In my opinion, we should

    public schools. It is ben

    education system with eq

    well-educated workforce,

    Parents of children in priv

    lives. For example, a comp

    a well-funded education s

    In conclusion, I do not b

    people who choose privat

    (269 words, band 9)

    hildren to private schools should not

     port the state educ

    ee or disagree with this statement?  

    parents of children who attend private

    e schools through taxes. Personally, I

    would be wrong to reduce taxes for f

    it would be difficult to calculate the coes, and staff would be required to m

    ay a certain amount of tax for public s

    t people are fortunate enough not to h

    in their lives, but they would not expec

    ilies were given a tax discount for send

    have a situation where poorer people p

    all be happy to pay our share of the

    ficial for all members of society to

    ual opportunities for all young people.

    and in turn a more productive and

    te schools may also see the advantage

    any owner will need well qualified and

    stem can provide such employees.

    elieve that any financial concessions s

    education.

    be required to pay

    ation system. 

    schools should not

    ompletely disagree

    amilies who pay for

    rrect amount of taxnage this complex

    ervices that we may

    ve to call the police

    t a tax reduction for

    ing their children to

    ay higher taxes than

    oney that supports

    ave a high quality

     This will result in a

    prosperous nation.

    of this in their own

    ompetent staff, and

    hould be made for

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    Nowadays celebrities are

    achievements, and t

    To what extent do you ag

    It is true that some celebri

    the work they do. While I

    believe that other famous

    On the one hand, many

    may have inherited monemay have appeared in g

    example would be Paris

    spends her time attendin

    idea that appearance, gla

    and good character. The

    easily, and that school wor

    On the other hand, there

    make them excellent role

    become famous idols be

    develop real skills and a

    ambition, which is requir

    chosen field. An example i

    world famous through yea

    can inspire children to dev

    (Add your own conclusion) 

    more famous for their glamour and w

    is sets a bad example to

    ee or disagree with this statement?  

    ties are known for their glamorous lifes

    gree that these celebrities set a bad ex

    people act as positive role models.

    eople do achieve fame without really

    from parents, married a famous or weossip magazines or on a reality TV p

    ilton, who is rich and famous for the

    parties and nightclubs, and her beha

    our and media profile are more impor

    essage to young people is that succ

    k is not necessary.

    are at least as many celebrities who

    odels for young people. Actors, musici

    ause they have worked hard and ap

    ilities. They demonstrate great effort,

    d for someone who wants to be trul

    s the actor and martial artist Jackie Ch

    rs of practice and hard work. This kind o

    elop their talents through application a

    ealth than for their

     young people. 

    tyles rather than for

    ample for children, I

    working for it. They

    lthy person, or theyrogramme. A good

    wrong reasons. She

    viour promotes the

    tant than hard work

    ss can be achieved

    e accomplishments

    ans and sports stars

    lied themselves to

    determination and

    successful in their

    n, who has become

    self-made celebrity

    d perseverance.

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    When choosing a job, the

    do you agree or disagree? 

    Many people choose thei

    disagree with the idea tha

    because I believe that oth

    On the one hand, I agree

    basic needs. For example,

    care, and education. Mosallows them to cover thes

    their jobs based on enj

    difficult to support them

    choosing a career path th

    enough money to live co

    Nevertheless, I believe tha

    in our jobs. Firstly, perso

    extremely important wh

    colleagues, for example, c

    and general quality of life

    from their professional ac

    rather than the money th

    want to help others and c

    In conclusion, while salari

    believe that money outwei

    (275 words, band 9)

    alary is the most important considera

     jobs based on the size of the salary

    money is the key consideration when

    r factors are equally important.

    that money is necessary in order for p

    we all need money to pay for housin

    people consider it a priority to at leaneeds and have a reasonable quality o

    yment or other non-financial factors,

    elves. Artists and musicians, for insta

    at they love, but that does not always

    fortably and raise a family.

    other considerations are just as import

    nal relationships and the atmosphere

    n choosing a job. Having a good

    an make a huge difference to workers’

    . Secondly, many people’s feelings of j

    ievements, the skills they learn, and the

    y earn. Finally, some people choose a

    ntribute something positive to society.

    es certainly affect people’s choice of

    ghs all other motivators.

    ion. To what extent

    ffered. Personally, I

    eciding on a career,

    eople to meet their

    , food, bills, health

    t earn a salary thatlife. If people chose

    they might find it

    nce, are known for

    provide them with

    ant as what we earn

    in a workplace are

    anager or friendly

    levels of happiness

    b satisfaction come

    position they reach,

    career because they

    rofession, I do not

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    Foreign visitors should

    attractions. To what exte

    It is sometimes argued th

    residents to visit importan

     The argument in favour o

    historical attractions ofte

    means that the resident p

    system. However, I beliecontribute to the econom

    range of goods and servi

     The governments and in

    important tourist sites and

    If travellers realised that t

    attractions in a particular

    on holiday. To take the UK

    rely on visitors coming to

    Cathedral. These two site

    helps to promote the nati

    due to higher prices, there

    of these important buildin

    In conclusion, I believe t

    overseas, and it would b

    residents.

    (269 words, band 9)

    ay more than local visitors for cult

    t do you agree or disagree with this op

      t tourists from overseas should be char

    sites and monuments. I completely dis

    higher prices for foreign tourists woul

    depend on state subsidies to keep

    pulation already pays money to these

    e this to be a very shortsighted viof the host country with the money t

    es, including food, souvenirs, accom

      abitants of every country should be

    encourage people from the rest of the

    ey would have to pay more to visit hi

    ation, they would perhaps decide not t

    as an example, the tourism industry an

    the country to see places like Windsor

    charge the same price regardless of

    on’s cultural heritage. If overseas touri

    would be a risk of insufficient funding

    s.

    at every effort should be made to a

    e counterproductive to make them p

    ural and historical

    inion?  

    ged more than local

    gree with this idea.

    be that cultural or

    them going, which

    ites through the tax

    w. Foreign touristsey spend on a wide

    odation and travel.

    happy to subsidise

    orld to visit them.

    storical and cultural

    o go to that country

    d many related jobs

    astle or Saint Paul’s

    ationality, and this

    sts stopped coming

    or the maintenance

    ttract tourists from

    ay more than local

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    Some people think that a

    free time to help the loc

    individual teenage

    Do you agree or disagree

    Many young people work

    the individual and societ

    therefore force all teenage

    Most young people are abeing given the added re

    demanding as a full-time j

    exam revision on top of

    some free time, we should

    doing sports and other lei

    when they finish their stud

    At the same time, I do n

    young people to do unpai

    of a free and fair society t

    Doing this can only lead t

    they were being used, an

    children. Currently, nobod

    In conclusion, teenagers

    opinion we should not ma

    (250 words, band 9)

    l teenagers should be required to do

    al community. They believe this wou

    r and society as

    n a volunteer basis, and this can only b

    y as a whole. However, I do not ag

    rs to do unpaid work.

    lready under enough pressure with thponsibility of working in their spare ti

    b, and teachers expect their students t

    ttending lessons every day. When you

    encourage them to enjoy it with their f

    ure activities. They have many years of

    ies.

    t believe that society has anything to

    d work. In fact, I would argue that it go

    force a group of people to do somethi

    o resentment amongst young people,

    parents, who would not want to be to

    is forced to volunteer, and this is surel

    may choose to work for free and hel

    e this compulsory.

    npaid work in their

    d benefit both the

    a whole. 

    e beneficial for both

    ee that we should

    eir studies, withoute. School is just as

    o do homework and

    ng people do have

    riends or to spend it

    ork ahead of them

    gain from obliging

    s against the values

    g against their will.

    ho would feel that

    ld how to raise their

    the best system.

    others, but in my

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    Some people believe

    To what extent do you ag

    Some hobbies are relativel

    I believe that both types

    statement that hobbies ne

    On the one hand, many p

    easy for most people is s

    simple to learn, and it iswimming pool when I w

    experience. Another hob

    anyone can take intere

    technicalities of operating

    satisfying activity.

    On the other hand, difficu

    more challenging, we mig

    do it successfully. For exa

    knowledge and expertise.

    competent at this activity,

    believe that many hobbi

    performance because the

    In conclusion, simple hob

    equally pleasurable for dif

    (266 words)

    hat hobbies need to be difficult

    ee or disagree?  

    y easy, while others present more of a c

    of hobby can be fun, and I therefor

    ed to be difficult in order to be enjoyabl

      ople enjoy easy hobbies. One example

    wimming. This hobby requires very li

    inexpensive. I remember learning ts a child, and it never felt like a deman

    y that I find easy and fun is photogra

    sting pictures without knowing too

    a camera. Despite being straightforwar

    lt hobbies can sometimes be more exci

    ht feel a greater sense of satisfaction

    mple, film editing is a hobby that req

    In my case, it took me around two ye

    but now I enjoy it much more than I

    s give us more pleasure when we rea

    esults are better and the feeling of achi

    bies can be fun and relaxing, but diffi

    erent reasons.

    to be enjoyable. 

    allenge. Personally,

    disagree with the

    e.

    of an activity that is

    tle equipment, it is

    swim at my localding or challenging

    phy. In my opinion,

    much about the

    d, taking photos is a

    ting. If an activity is

    hen we manage to

    ires a high level of

    rs before I became

    id when I started. I

    ch a higher level of

    vement is greater.

    ult hobbies can be

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    Many people decide on a

    argue, leads to a more sa

    view? What other things c

    It is true that some peopl

    and they are happy to sp

    accept that this may suit

    seeking job satisfaction in

    On the one hand, havinworking life. Many people

    and it gives them a gre

    gradually achieve them. F

    to realise this ambition th

    years of training. In my e

    choose to change career b

    have invested so much ti

    On the other hand, peop

    Firstly, not everyone drea

    to try a variety of professi

    reinvigorating experience.

    earning money, and they

    enjoy life outside work.

    conditions, rather than th

    enthusiastic colleagues, a

    satisfying, regardless of th

    In conclusion, it can certai

    of one’s life, but this is by

    career path early in their lives and k

    isfying working life. To what extent do

    an people do in order to have a satisfyi

    know from an early age what career t

    end the rest of their lives in the same

    any people, I believe that others enjoy

    different ways.

    a defined career path can certainlydecide as young children what they

    t sense of satisfaction to work towa

    r example, many children dream of be

    ey need to gain the relevant qualifica

    perience, very few people who have

    ecause they find their work so rewardin

    e and effort to reach their goal.

    le find happiness in their working liv

    s of doing a particular job, and it can b

    ns; starting out on a completely new

    Secondly, some people see their jobs a

    are happy if their salary is high enou

    Finally, job satisfaction is often the

    career itself. For example, a positive

    d an inspirational boss can make wor

    profession.

    nly be satisfying to pursue a particular

    o means the only route to fulfilment.

    ep to it. This, they

     you agree with this

    g working life?

    hey want to pursue,

    profession. While I

    changing careers or

    lead to a satisfyingant to do as adults,

    ds their goals and

    oming doctors, but

    ions and undertake

    qualified as doctors

    g, and because they

    s in different ways.

    e equally rewarding

    areer path can be a

    s simply a means of

    h to allow them to

    result of working

    orking atmosphere,

    ing life much more

    areer for the whole

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    (310 words)

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    We cannot help everyo

    concerned with

    To what extent do you ag

    Some people believe tha

    there are problems in our

    we should try to help as m

    On the one hand, I acce

    citizens. In most comdisadvantaged in some

    even the wealthiest of cit

    there are usually opportu

    people. In the UK, peopl

    serving free food in a soup

    obvious ways to help, I ca

    local charity.

    At the same time, I believ

    our national borders. In so

    serious than those in our

    example, when children

    governments and individ

    vaccines that already exis

    much greater impact than

    In conclusion, it is true t

    boundaries should not sto

    (280 words, band 9)

    e in the world that needs help, so

    our own communities

    ee or disagree with this statement?  

    we should not help people in other

    own society. I disagree with this view b

      any people as possible.

    t that it is important to help our nei

    unities there are people who aray. It is possible to find homeless peo

    ies, and for those who are concerned

    nities to volunteer time or give mon

    can help in a variety of ways, from d

    kitchen. As the problems are on our do

    understand why some people feel that

    that we have an obligation to help th

    me countries the problems that people

    own communities, and it is often eve

    are dying from curable diseases in

    als in richer countries can save lives s

    . A small donation to an international

    helping in our local area.

    at we cannot help everyone, but in

    p us from helping those who are in need

      we should only be

    and countries. 

    ountries as long as

    cause I believe that

    ghbours and fellow

    impoverished orple, for example, in

    bout this problem,

    y to support these

    onating clothing to

    rstep, and there are

    we should prioritise

    se who live beyond

    face are much more

    easier to help. For

    African countries,

    imply by paying for

    harity might have a

    y opinion national

    .

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    In recent years, there has

    and personal achieveme

    in egalitarian societies. O

     possible only if individua

    merits. 

    What is your view of the r

    In my opinion, an egalitari

    the same opportunities. I

    of society.

    Education is an important

    all children should have

    either free or affordable f

    society without free sch

    young adults from weal

    opportunities, and they w

    kind of inequality would e

    I would argue that equal

    freedom to succeed or fai

    their motivation to succe

    believe that most people

    potential if they thought t

    same effort would know

    other hand, would be m

    that the odds of success w

    In conclusion, it seems to

    personal success.

    een growing interest in the relationsh

    t. Some people believe that individua

    thers believe that high levels of perso

    ls are free to succeed or fail accordin

    lationship between equality and pers

    an society is one in which everyone has

    ompletely agree that people can achie

    factor with regard to personal success

    ccess to free schooling, and higher e

    r all those who chose to pursue a un

    oling or affordable higher education,

    thier families would have access to

    ould therefore be better prepared for

    sure the success of some but harm the

    rights and opportunities are not in c

    l. In other words, equality does not m

    d, or that they are not allowed to fail

    would feel more motivated to work h

    hat they lived in a fair society. Those w

    hat they had wasted their opportunit

    re likely to demotivate people becaus

    re stacked in favour of those from privil

    e that there is a positive relationship b

     p between equality

     s can achieve more

    al achievement are

    to their individual

    nal success?  

    the same rights and

    ve more in this kind

    in life. I believe that

    ducation should be

    iversity degree. In a

    only children and

    the best learning

    he job market. This

    prospects of others.

    nflict with people’s

    an that people lose

    . On the contrary, I

    ard and reach their

    o did not make the

    . Inequality, on the

    e they would know

    eged backgrounds.

    tween equality and

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    Universities should acce

     subject. To what extent d

    In my opinion, men and

    However, I do not agree

    in every university subject.

    Having the same numb

    unrealistic. Student num

    institution receives. If a unand females, it would nee

    are more popular with on

    for equal proportions. F

    applicants, and it would b

    needed to go to males.

    Apart from the practical

    unfair to base admission t

    to select the best candida

    way, both men and wom

    they will be successful if t

    student is the best candid

    favour of a male student w

    In conclusion, the selecti

    would be both impractic

    gender.

    (265 words, band 9)

    t equal numbers of male and femal

     you agree or disagree?  

    women should have the same educat

    ith the idea of accepting equal proport

    r of men and women on all degre

    ers on any course depend on the a

    iversity decided to fill courses with equenough applicants of each gender. In r

    gender than the other, and it would n

    r example, nursing courses tend to

    e difficult to fill these courses if fifty p

    oncerns expressed above, I also belie

    university courses on gender. Universi

    tes for each course according to their

    n have the same opportunities, and a

    ey work hard to achieve good grades

    te for a place on a course, it is surely w

      ith lower grades or fewer qualifications.

    n of university students should be ba

    l and unfair to change to a selection

     students in every

    ional opportunities.

    ions of each gender

    courses is simply

    plications that the

    l numbers of maleseality, many courses

    t be practical to aim

    ttract more female

    r cent of the places

    e that it would be

    ies should continue

    ualifications. In this

    plicants know that

    t school. If a female

    rong to reject her in

    ed on merit, and it

    rocedure based on

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    DiscussiSome people think that

    Others believe that they s

    in the future, such as thos

    Discuss both these views

    People have different vieto what they can study a

    students to be forced into

    able to study the course of

     There are various reason

    subjects that will be usefu

    medicine, engineering anthan certain art degrees.

    courses provide more jo

    therefore an improved qu

    by forcing people to cho

    that any knowledge and

    technology in higher edu

    greater future prosperity.

    In spite of these argument

    their preferred areas of st

    are passionate about wha

    areas of knowledge will

    employers begin to value

    nall university students should study

    hould only be allowed to study subjec

    related to science and technology. 

    nd give your own opinion. 

    s about how much choice students shouniversity. While some argue that it

    certain key subject areas, I believe that

    their choice.

    s why people believe that universitie

    l in the future. They may assert that u

      d information technology are more likFrom a personal perspective, it can b

    b opportunities, career progression,

    lity of life for students who take them.

    se particular university subjects, gove

    skill gaps in the economy are covered

    ation could lead to new inventions, ec

    s, I believe that university students shou

    dy. In my opinion, society will benefit

    they are learning. Besides, nobody can

    e most useful to society in the future,

    creative thinking skills above practical

    hatever they like.

     s that will be useful

    ld have with regardould be better for

    everyone should be

    s should only offer

    iversity courses like

    ely to be beneficialargued that these

    etter salaries, and

    n the societal level,

    nments can ensure

    . Finally, a focus on

    nomic growth, and

    ld be free to choose

    ore if our students

    really predict which

    and it may be that

    or technical skills. If

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    this were the case, perh

    philosophy than of scienc

    In conclusion, although it

    most useful subjects, I per

    right to study whatever th

    (297 words, band 9)

    aps we would need more students

    or technology.

    might seem sensible for universities t

    sonally prefer the current system in wh

    y like.

    of art, history and

    focus only on the

    ich people have the

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    Some people think that

    reducing traffic accident

    more effective in improvi

    opinion. 

    People have differing vie

    safer. In my view, both

    together to promote bette

    On the one hand, strict pmore safely. Penalties for

    people avoid repeating th

    such as small fines, licen

    sentences. The aim of th

    actions have negative con

    more disciplined and alert,

    On the other hand, I beli

    ways that do not punish

    properly before they start

    an extended or more diffi

    safe road design. For exa

    road bends can be added

    from driving too quickly.

    accidents by investing in b

    would need to travel by ca

    In conclusion, while punis

    road safety measures shou

    (269 words, band 9)

     strict punishments for driving offen

    . Others, however, believe that other

    g road safety. Discuss both these view

    s with regard to the question of how

    unishments and a range of other me

    r driving habits.

    nishments can certainly help to encoudangerous drivers can act as a dete

    e same offence. There are various type

    e suspension, driver awareness cours

    ese punishments is to show dangero

    sequences. As a result, we would hope

    and that they follow the rules more car

      ve that safe driving can be promoted

    drivers. Firstly, it is vitally important

    o drive, and this could be done in scho

    ult driving test. Secondly, more attenti

    ple, signs can be used to warn peopl

    to calm traffic, and speed cameras can

    Finally, governments or local councils

    etter public transport, which would me

    r.

    ments can help to prevent bad driving

    ld also be introduced.

    ces are the key to

    easures would be

    and give your own

    to make our roads

    asures can be used

    age people to driverent, meaning that

    s of driving penalty,

    s, and even prison

    s drivers that their

    hat drivers become

    fully.

    in several different

    to educate people

    ls or even as part of

    on could be paid to

    , speed bumps and

    elp to deter people

    could reduce road

    n that fewer people

    , I believe that other

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    Some people think that i

    while others think that pe

    and give your own opinio

    People have different vie

    nowadays. In my view, m

    were in the past.

     There are two main reaso

    each other now. Firstly, lifof living has increased so

    parents for help when b

    without help it would b

    mortgage. Secondly, peo

    better quality of life for t

    work full-time, and they

    child care.

    However, I would agree

    these days. In most coun

    which means that people

    have more freedom to tr

    many students choose to

    this experience makes th

    factor in this growing inde

    from any part of the world.

    In conclusion, while there

    each other more, my own

    (279 words)

    the modern world we are more depen

    ople have become more independent. 

    s about whether we are more or less d

    odern life forces us to be more indep

    s why it could be argued that we are

    is more complex and difficult, especiaramatically. For example, young adults

    ying a house. Property prices are hi

    e impossible for many people to pa

    le seem to be more ambitious nowada

    eir families. This means that both par

    epend on support from grandparents

    ith those who believe that people are

    tries, families are becoming smaller a

    cannot count on relatives as much as t

    vel and live far away from our home

    study abroad instead of going to their

    m more independent as they learn to

    pendence is technology, which allows

    are some reasons to believe that peo

    iew is that we are more independent th

    dent on each other,

    Discuss both views

    ependent on others

    ndent than people

    ore dependent on

    lly because the costtend to rely on their

    her than ever, and

    y a deposit and a

    ys, and they want a

    nts usually need to

    and babysitters for

    more independent

    nd more dispersed,

    ey used to. We also

    owns. For example,

    local university, and

    live alone. Another

    s to work alone and

    le now depend on

    an ever.

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    Some people think that

    artists such as painters a

    funded by alternative sou

    People have different vie

    disagree with the idea of

    projects should come fro

    Some art projects definit

    works of art in public spacexample, there are severa

    which has been redevelo

    history. They serve to edu

    points for visitors and to

    artists to produce this kin

    much less interesting and

    On the other hand, I can

    art. The main reason for th

    For example, state budge

    and security, among oth

    function properly, where

    luxury. Another reason

    professional, and they sho

    In conclusion, there are g

    financial support, but in m

    (263 words)

    governments should give financial

    d musicians. Others believe that creati

    rces. Discuss both views and give your

    s about the funding of creative artists.

    overnment support for artists, I believ

    both governments and other sources.

    ly require help from the state. In the

    es, such as streets or squares in city cenl new statues and sculptures in the do

    ed recently. These artworks represent c

    cate people about the city, and act as l

    rists. Governments and local councils

    of art, because without their funding

    ttractive.

    nderstand the arguments against gov

    is view is that governments have more

    s need to be spent on education, healt

    r areas. These public services are vit

    s the work of creative artists, even in

    or this opinion is that artists do a

    ld therefore earn their own money by s

    od reasons why artists should rely on a

    opinion government help is sometime

    upport to creative

    ve artists should be

    wn opinion. 

    While some people

    that money for art

    UK, there are many

    res. In Liverpool, forcks area of the city,

    ulture, heritage and

    andmarks or talking

    should pay creative

    our cities would be

    rnment funding for

    important concerns.

    hcare, infrastructure

    al for a country to

    public places, is a

     job like any other

    elling their work.

    lternative sources of

    s necessary.

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    Nowadays animal experi

    test the safety of other pr

    be banned because it is m

    favour of them

    Discuss both views and gi

    It is true that medicines

    they are cleared for huma

    is morally wrong, I would

    for the development of m

    On the one hand, there a

     To use a common exampl

    that the effectiveness of

    argue that humans have

    the lives of all creatures sh

    do not justify the sufferin

    of research.

    On the other hand, reliabl

    available. Supporters of t

    amount of suffering on t

    saved. They argue that op

    of their own families need

    the use of animal experi

    testing for non-medical pr

    drugs and medical proced

    In conclusion, it seems to

    medical research until equ

    ents are widely used to develop ne

    oducts. Some people argue that these

    orally wrong to cause animals to suffer

    because of their benefits

    e your own opinion. 

    nd other products are routinely teste

    use. While I tend towards the viewpoin

    ave to support a limited amount of ani

    dicines.

    e clear ethical arguments against ani

    of this practice, laboratory mice may b

    new drug can be measured. Oppone

    o right to subject animals to this kind

    ould be respected. They believe that th

    caused, and that scientists should use

    alternatives to animal experimentatio

    e use of animals in medical research b

    e part of mice or rats can be justifie

    ponents of such research might feel dif

    ed a medical treatment that had been

    entation. Personally, I agree with the

    oducts, but I feel that it may be a neces

    res are concerned.

    e that it would be wrong to ban testin

    ally effective alternatives have been dev

      medicines and to

     xperiments should

     , while others are in

    to humanity. 

    on animals before

    t that animal testing

    al experimentation

    al experimentation.

    e given an illness so

    ts of such research

    of trauma, and that

    benefits to humans

    alternative methods

    may not always be

    elieve that a certain

    if human lives are

    erently if a member

    developed through

    banning of animal

    sary evil where new

    on animals for vital

    eloped.

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    (270 words, band 9)

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    Some people regard vide

    tool. Others, however, b

    the people who play th

    outweigh the benefits?  

    Many people, and children

    that these games can som

    are more likely to have a h

    On the one hand, videogamers, are transported

    engaging than real-life

    encourage imagination a

    problem solving, all of

    Furthermore, it has been

    motor skills and help to pr

    However, I would argue th

    can be highly addictive b

    frequent rewards to keep

    trying to progress throug

    friends. This type of addict

    at school, when homewo

    console. The rise in obesit

    lifestyle and lack of exercis

    In conclusion, it seems t

    significant than the possib

    (258 words, band 9)

    games as harmless fun, or even as a

    lieve that videos games are having a

    m. In your opinion, do the drawbac

    in particular, enjoy playing computer g

    etimes have a positive effect on the use

    rmful impact.

    ames can be both entertaining and einto virtual worlds which are often

    astimes. From an educational persp

    d creativity, as well as concentration, l

    which are useful skills outside th

    hown that computer simulation game

    pare them for real-world tasks, such as

    at these benefits are outweighed by the

    ecause users are constantly given scor

    them playing. Many children now sp

    h the levels of a game or to get a hig

    ion can have effects ranging from lack

    rk is sacrificed for a few more hours

    in recent years has also been linked in

    e that often accompany gaming addicti

      me that the potential dangers of vid

    le benefits.

    useful educational

    adverse effect on

    ks of video games

    ames. While I accept

    r, I believe that they

    ucational. Users, ormore exciting and

    ctive, these games

    ogical thinking and

    gaming context.

    can improve users’

    lying a plane.

    drawbacks. Gaming

    es, new targets and

    nd hours each day

    er score than their

    f sleep to problems

    n the computer or

    art to the sedentary

    n.

    o games are more

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    Some people think that

    while others believe

    Discuss both views and gi

    People have different vie

    museums can and should

    On the one hand, it can

    Museums are tourist attra

    objects that many peopleor she has to read or liste

    more of an emphasis on

    designed to be visually sp

    as part of its exhibitions.

    On the other hand, some

    aim of any exhibition s

    previously know. Usually

    needs to be explained, an

    professional guides to talk

    visitors can listen to detail

    can play an important role

    other aspects of life.

    In conclusion, it seems t

    interesting, enjoyable and

    learn something at the sa

    (253 words, band 9)

    useums should be enjoyable places t

    that the purpose of museums

    e you own opinion. 

    s about the role and function of muse

    e both entertaining and educational.

    e argued that the main role of a mus

    tions, and their aim is to exhibit a coll

    ill want to see. The average visitor mayto too much educational content, so

    enjoyment rather than learning. This

    ctacular, and may have interactive acti

    eople argue that museums should foc

    ould be to teach visitors something

    his means that the history behind th

    this can be done in various ways. So

    to their visitors, while other museums o

    ed commentary about the exhibition. In

    in teaching people about history, cultur

    o me that a good museum should

    educational experience so that peopl

    e time.

    o entertain people,

    is to educate. 

    ums. In my opinion,

    eum is to entertain.

    ction of interesting

    become bored if hemuseums often put

    type of museum is

    ities or even games

    s on education. The

    that they did not

    museum’s exhibits

    e museums employ

    ffer headsets so that

    this way, museums

    e, science and many

    e able to offer an

    e can have fun and

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    Some people believe tha

     successful career, while

     school.

    Discuss both views and gi

    When they finish school,

    continue their education.

    school, I would argue that

     The option to start workyoung people want to sta

    become independent, and

    In terms of their career, y

    their studies, may progr

    experience and learn prac

    to promotions and a succe

    On the other hand, I beli

    studies. Firstly, academic q

    it is impossible to becom

    degree. As a result, uni

    opportunities, and they

    qualifications. Secondly, t

    sometimes there are hun

    people who do not have

    compete.

    For the reasons mentione

    successful in their careers i

    (271 words, band 9)

    t studying at university or college is

    thers believe that it is better to get

    e your opinion. 

    teenagers face the dilemma of whet

    hile there are some benefits to gettin

    it is better to go to college or university.

    traight after school is attractive for sert earning money as soon as possible. I

    they will be able to afford their own ho

    ung people who decide to find work, r

    ss more quickly. They will have the

    tical skills related to their chosen profe

    ssful career.

    ve that it is more beneficial for studen

    ualifications are required in many profe

    e a doctor, teacher or lawyer without

    ersity graduates have access to m

      tend to earn higher salaries than

    he job market is becoming increasing

    reds of applicants for one position in

    ualifications from a university or colleg

    above, it seems to me that students

    f they continue their studies beyond sch

    the best route to a

     job straight after

    er to get a job or

    a job straight after

    eral reasons. Manyn this way, they can

    use or start a family.

    ather than continue

    hance to gain real

    ssion. This may lead

    ts to continue their

    ssions. For example,

    having the relevant

    re and better job

    those with fewer

    ly competitive, and

    a company. Young

    e will not be able to

    re more likely to be

    ool level.

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    Several languages are in

    numbers of people. Some

    on saving these languag

    Discuss both these views

    It is true that some minori

    can be argued that gove

    believe that these languag

     There are several reasonsmoney. Firstly, if a langua

    education programmes wi

    state will have to pay fo

    better spent on other pub

    efficient for countries to h

    costs related to communic

    Despite the above argu

    languages that are less wi

    of communication; it has

    who speak it. If a languag

    we will lose the rich cul

    spending money to pro

    traditions, customs and be

    In conclusion, it may save

    disappear, but in the long

    cultural heritage.

    (258 words)

    anger of extinction because they are s

     people say that governments should

     s, while others believe that would be

    nd give your opinion. 

    ty languages may disappear in the nea

    rnments could save money by allowin

    es should be protected and preserved.

    hy saving minority languages could bge is only spoken by a small number

    ll be needed to make sure that more pe

    facilities, teachers and marketing. Th

    lic services. Secondly, it would be muc

    ave just one language. Governments c

    ating with each minority group.

    ents, I believe that governments sho

    ely spoken. A language is much more t

    a vital connection with the cultural id

    disappears, a whole way of life will di

    tural diversity that makes societies

    ect minority languages, governments

    haviours that are part of a country’s hist

      money in the short term if we allow m

    term this would have an extremely neg

    oken by very small

     pend public money

    a waste of money. 

    r future. Although it

    g this to happen, I

    e seen as a waste off people, expensive

    ple learn it, and the

    is money might be

    cheaper and more

    ould cut all kinds of

    uld try to preserve

    han simply a means

    ntity of the people

    sappear with it, and

    ore interesting. By

    can also preserve

    ry.

    inority languages to

    ative impact on our

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    Causes aMany people prefer to w

    could

    Should governments give

    It is true that foreign fil

    produced films. There cougovernments should pro

     There are various reasons

    films produced in their o

    countries have huge bu

    spectacular locations. Holl

    examples of such product

    why these big-budget fil

    actors and actresses, and

    directors. The poor quali

    comparison.

    In my view, government

    country, there may be tal

    opportunity to prove th

    overseas, these people ne

    costs related to producing

    they would see an increas

    and perhaps even a rise i

    d Effects/Sol  tch foreign films rather than locally p

    this

    more financial support to local film in

      s are more popular in many countrie

    ld be several reasons why this is the casote local film-making by subsidising the

    hy many people find foreign films mor

    n countries. Firstly, the established film

    gets for action, special effects and

    wood blockbusters like ‘Avatar’ or the J

    ions, and their global appeal is undenia

    s are so successful is that they often s

    they are made by the most accompli

    ty, low-budget filmmaking in many

    should support local film industries

    nted amateur film-makers who just n

    mselves. To compete with big-budge

    ed money to pay for film crews, actors

    high-quality films. If governments did h

    in employment in the film industry, inc

    tourist numbers. New Zealand, for e

    utionsroduced films. Why

    be?  

    ustries?  

    s than domestically

    e, and I believe thatindustry.

    enjoyable than the

    industries in certain

    o shoot scenes in

    ames Bond films are

    ble. Another reason

    ar the most famous

    hed producers and

    ountries suffers in

    financially. In every

    ed to be given the

    t productions from

    and a host of other

    elp with these costs,

    ome from film sales,

    ample, has seen an

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    increase in tourism related

    government subsidies.

    In conclusion, I believe th

    of locally made films and

    currently dominate the ma

    (294 words, band 9)

    to the 'Lord of the Rings' films, which w

    t increased financial support could hel

    allow them to compete with the forei

    rket.

    ere partly funded by

    to raise the quality

    n productions that

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    These days more fathers

    go out to work. What cou

    negative development?  

    It is true that men are inc

    more women than ever ar

    reasons for this, and I cons

    In recent years, parents h

    rights movements have mgain qualifications and pu

    to stay at home and look a

    has meant that both marr

    starting a family. Therefor

    and who stays at home

    based on which partner ea

    In my view, the changes

    happy to live in a society i

    which women are not pu

    only fair that men shoul

    responsibilities if this is w

    own decisions about wh

    particular circumstances a

    In conclusion, the changin

    changes in society, and I b

    (274 words, band 9)

    tay at home and take care of their chil

    d be the reasons for this? Do you thin

    reasingly likely to take on the role of h

    e the breadwinners in their families. Th

    ider it to be a very positive trend.

    ve had to adapt to various changes in

    de great progress, and it has become nsue a career. It has also become socially

    fter their children. At the same time, th

    iage partners usually need to work and

    , when couples have children, they ma

    epending on the personal preference

    rns the most money.

    escribed above should be seen as pro

    n which men and women have equal

    under pressure to sacrifice their caree

    be free to leave their jobs in order

    hat they wish to do. Couples should b

    ich parental role each partner takes,

    d needs.

    g roles of men and women in the family

    lieve that these developments are desi

     

    dren while mothers

    it is a positive or a

    ousehusband, while

    re could be several

    our societies. Equal

    ormal for women toacceptable for men

    rising cost of living

    save money before

    y decide who works

    of each partner, or

    ress. We should be

    pportunities, and in

    rs. Equally, it seems

    o assume childcare

    e left to make their

    according to their

    are a result of wider

    able.

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    In the developed world,

    this cause for individuals

    to reduce the impact of a

    It is true that people in i

    before. Although there

    trend, societies can take st

    As people live longer and

    related problems can bemore people of retirem

    proportion of younger, w

    receive less money in taxe

    ageing population will

    pressures will include a ri

    will increasingly have to lo

     There are several action

    described above. Firstly, a

    working adults, perhaps

    healthy enough to contin

    governments to encourag

    adults who pay taxes. Fina

    other areas and spent on

    the rising numbers of olde

    In conclusion, various mea

    arise as the populations of

    (265 words, band 9)

    verage life expectancy is increasing.

    and society? Suggest some measures

    eing populations. 

    ndustrialised nations can expect to li

    ill undoubtedly be some negative c

    ps to mitigate these potential problem

      the populations of developed countrie

    anticipated. The main issue is that thent age who will be eligible to rece

    rking adults will be smaller, and govern

    s in relation to the size of the populatio

    ean a greater tax burden for work

    e in the demand for healthcare, and t

    ok after their elderly relatives.

    s that governments could take to s

    simple solution would be to increase th

    rom 65 to 70. Nowadays, people of t

    e a productive working life. A second m

    e immigration in order to increase the

    lly, money from national budgets will n

    vital healthcare, accommodation and tr

    r citizens.

    sures can be taken to tackle the proble

    countries grow older.

    What problems will

    hat could be taken

    e longer than ever

    nsequences of this

    .

    grow older, several

    re will obviously beive a pension. The

    ments will therefore

    . In other words, an

    ing adults. Further

    e fact young adults

    olve the problems

    e retirement age for

    his age tend to be

    easure would be for

    number of working

    ed to be taken from

    ansport facilities for

    s that are certain to

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    Direct-qHappiness is considered v

    Why is it difficult to defin

    What factors are importa

    It is no doubt true that th

    While the personal naturebe some common needs

    happiness.

    Happiness is difficult to

    individual person. Nobo

    feelings, and we all have

    Some people, for exampl

    achieving success, wherea

    the same time, a range o

    associated with the idea o

    in a variety of different wa

    Although it seems almost

    people would agree that t

    hard for a person to be

    enough food to eat. Our b

    pleasant life. Secondly, th

    with family and friends,

    complete isolation. Other

    purpose in life.

    estionery important in life. 

    ?  

    t in achieving happiness?  

    e majority of people would like to be

    of happiness makes it difficult to descrihat we all share with regard to experi

    define because it means somethin

    y can fully understand or experienc

    our own particular passions from whic

    e, derive a sense of satisfaction from

    s for others, health and family are much

    f other feelings, from excitement to p

    f happiness, and the same person may

    s.

    impossible to give a precise definition

    ere are some basic preconditions to ac

    appy if he or she does not have a sa

    asic survival needs must surely be met

    greatest joy in life is usually found in

    nd it is rare to find a person who i

    key factors could be individual freed

    happy in their lives.

    e, there do seem toencing or achieving

    different to each

    e another person’s

    h we take pleasure.

    earning money or

    more important. At

    acefulness, may be

    herefore feel happy

    of happiness, most

    ieving it. Firstly, it is

    e place to live and

    efore we can lead a

    shared experiences

    content to live in

    om and a sense of

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    In conclusion, happiness is

    but I believe that our basi

    before we can experience i

    (292 words, band 9)

    There are many different

    Is the traditional music o

    that is heard everywhere

    It is true that a rich variety

    vital part of all human

    traditional music is more i

    Music is something that a

    are taught songs by our

    simply as a form of enjoy

    appear that the act of sinregardless of their age. L

    come to see our favourite

    arouses emotions in a wa

    life without it.

    In my opinion, traditional

    has become so popular. Iessentially a commercial

     Traditional music, by cont

     Traditional styles, such as

    cultural identity. It would

    these national styles disap

     

    difficult to define because it is particul

    c needs for shelter, food and company

    t.

    types of music in the world today. Wh

    f a country more important than the

    owadays?  

    of musical styles can be found around

    ultures for a range of reasons, and I

    portant than modern, international m

      ccompanies all of us throughout our li

    arents and teachers as a means of le

    ent. Children delight in singing with

    ing in a group creates a connection bter in life, people’s musical preferenc

    songs as part of our life stories. Music

    that words alone cannot. In short, it is

    music should be valued over the inte

    nternational pop music is often catchproduct that is marketed and sold

    ast, expresses the culture, customs and

    ...(example)..., connect us to the past a

    be a real pity if pop music became s

    eared.

    r to each individual,

    need to be fulfilled

    do we need music?

    nternational music

    he world. Music is a

    would argue that

    sic.

    ves. As children, we

    arning language, or

    thers, and it would

    tween participants,s develop, and we

    both expresses and

    difficult to imagine

    national music that

    y and fun, but it isy business people.

    history of a country.

    nd form part of our

    predominant that

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    In conclusion, music is a

    traditional music should b

    (261 words, band 9)

    necessary part of human existence,

    given more importance than internati

    and I believe that

    nal music.

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    Nowadays the way many

    technology. 

    In what ways has tech

    make? Has this been a po

    It is true that new techno

    people. Technology has

    there are both positive an

     Technology has had an ilife. Firstly, telephones and

    interact without ever me

    possibilities for relationshi

    can now take video lesso

    people use social network

    share common interests, a

    face.

    On the one hand, thes

    between people in differe

    was limited to written lett

    video are almost as good

    interactions, either in wor

    new communication tech

    discouraging real interac

    friends online rather than

    relationships are a poor su

    In conclusion, technolog

    people, but not all of the o

     people interact with each other has

    ology affected the types of relatio

    itive or negative development?  

    logies have had an influence on com

    ffected relationships in various ways,

    negative effects.

    mpact on relationships in business, ethe Internet allow business people in d

    ting each other. Secondly, services lik

    ps between students and teachers. For

    s with a teacher in a different city or c

      s, like Facebook, to make new friends a

    nd they interact through their compute

    developments can be extremely p

      nt countries was much more difficult w

    rs or telegrams. Nowadays, interaction

    s face-to-face meetings, and many of u

    k or social contexts. On the other han

      nologies can also have the result of i

    ion. For example, many young peop

    mixing with their peers in the real worl

    bstitute for real friendships.

    y has certainly revolutionised com

    utcomes of this revolution have been p

      hanged because of

     ships that people

    unication between

    and in my opinion

    ucation and socialifferent countries to

    Skype create new

    example, a student

    untry. Finally, many

    nd find people who

    s rather than face to

    sitive. Cooperation

    en communication

    by email, phone or

    s benefit from these

    , the availability of

    olating people and

    le choose to make

    , and these ‘virtual’

    unication between

    sitive.

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    (257 words, band 9)

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    Explain some of the way

    can governments do to a

    Humans are responsible f

    steps to reduce the dama

    environmental problems a

    to address these problems

     Two of the biggest thre

    emissions from factorieswhich may have a devas

    population increases, we

    contaminates the earth an

    Governments could certai

    introduce laws to limit

    renewable energy from s

    taxes’ on drivers and airli

    use public transport and t

    Individuals should also

    environment. They can tak

    less packaging, and recy

    reusable bags for shoppe

    their car parks. By reusing

    In conclusion, both natio

    looking after the environ

     

    in which humans are damaging the

    dress these problems? What can indivi

    r a variety of environmental problems,

    e that we are causing to the planet. T

    nd the measures that governments and

    .

    ts to the environment are air polluti

    nd exhaust fumes from vehicles leadtating effect on the planet in the fu

    re also producing ever greater quanti

    d pollutes rivers and oceans.

    nly make more effort to reduce air p

    emissions from factories or to force

    lar, wind or water power. They could

    e companies. In this way, people woul

    take fewer flights abroad, therefore red

    take responsibility for the impact

    e public transport rather than driving, c

    le as much as possible. Most superm

    s as well as ‘banks’ for recycling glass,

    nd recycling, we can help to reduce wa

      nal governments and individuals mus

    ent.

    environment. What

    ual people do?  

    ut we can also take

    is essay will discuss

    individuals can take

    on and waste. Gas

    to global warming,ure. As the human

    ies of waste, which

    llution. They could

    companies to use

    also impose ‘green

    d be encouraged to

    ucing emissions.

    hey have on the

    oose products with

    arkets now provide

    plastic and paper in

    te.

    t play their part in

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    (250 words)