Very plain and not eye catching at all.

Photos don’t look like they’ve been planned at all, they are also very boring and have only natural lighting. They also haven't been edited.

The text doesn’t look as if its been thought about either and it looks very unfinished.

I think that overall the preliminary magazine doesn’t look as if much

thought of effort went into it. Also doesn’t really look like a professional magazine.

Text has been arranged better.

Here you can clearly see that the contents page for the preliminary had hardly any thought of effort go into it.

There are not photos, or any sign of editing.

Here there is clearly editing and effort gone into making the contents page.

The layout has been planned and thought out.

The layout of the writing has been thought out and how its going to shape around the image.

Very boring contents page.