DESCRIPTION

A descriptive text is a text that wants you to

picture, or see in your mind, what is being

described.

A husband was killed and his wife taken to

hospital after having been run over by their own

car as it reversed as they were putting bags in

the boot.

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A novel might want you to imagine the characters

and see them in your mind.

Just then I noticed a small, oldish man walking

briskly around the edge of the pool. He was

immaculately dressed in a white suit and he walked

very quickly with little bouncing strides, pushing

himself high up onto his toes with each step. He

had on a large creamy Panama hat, and he came

bouncing along the side of the pool, looking at the

people and the chairs.

Man From the South, by Roald Dahl (1916-1990)

A travel passage will expect you to see the country being described.

And after all the weather was ideal. They could not have had amore perfect day for a garden-party if they had ordered it.Windless, warm, the sky without a cloud. Only the blue wasveiled with a haze of light gold, as it is sometimes in earlysummer. The gardener had been up since dawn, mowing thelawns and sweeping them, until the grass and the dark flatrosettes where the daisy plants had been seemed to shine. Asfor the roses, you could not help feeling they understood thatroses are the only flowers that impress people at garden-parties; the only flowers that everybody is certain of knowing.Hundreds, yes, literally hundreds, had come out in a single night;the green bushes bowed down as though they had been visitedby archangels.

The Garden Party by Katherine Mansfield (1888-1923)

Descriptive texts usually use adjectives and adverbs

Four men in their shirt-sleeves stood grouped together onthe garden path. They carried staves covered with rolls ofcanvas, and they had big tool-bags slung on their backs.They looked impressive. Laura wished now that she had notgot the bread-and-butter, but there was nowhere to put it,and she couldn't possibly throw it away. She blushed andtried to look severe and even a little bit short-sighted as shecame up to them.

"Good morning," she said, copying her mother's voice. Butthat sounded so fearfully affected that she was ashamed, andstammered like a little girl, "Oh - er - have you come - is it aboutthe marquee?“

The Garden Party by Katherine Mansfield (1888-1923)

Descriptive texts usually use comparisons to

help picture the scene

Against the karakas. Then the karaka-trees

would be hidden. And they were so lovely, with

their broad, gleaming leaves, and their clusters

of yellow fruit. They were like trees you imagined

growing on a desert island, proud, solitary, lifting

their leaves and fruits to the sun in a kind of silent

splendour. Must they be hidden by a marquee?

The Garden Party by Katherine Mansfield (1888-1923)

Descriptive texts usually address the five senses (how things smell, look,sound, feel and taste)

Laura put back the receiver, flung her arms over her head, took a deepbreath, stretched and let them fall. "Huh," she sighed, and the moment afterthe sigh she sat up quickly. She was still, listening. All the doors in the houseseemed to be open. The house was alive with soft, quick steps and runningvoices. The green baize door that led to the kitchen regions swung open andshut with a muffled thud.And now there came a long, chuckling absurd sound. It was the heavy pianobeing moved on its stiff castors. But the air! If you stopped to notice, was theair always like this? Little faint winds were playing chase, in at the tops of thewindows, out at the doors. And there were two tiny spots of sun, one on theinkpot, one on a silver photograph frame, playing too. Darling little spots.Especially the one on the inkpot lid. It was quite warm. A warm little silverstar. She could have kissed it.

The front door bell pealed, and there sounded the rustle of Sadie's print skirton the stairs.

The Garden Party by Katherine Mansfield (1888-1923)