Improving my front page

Front pageSun model reshoot:

Front page

To begin improving my front page I began by deleting the sun image of the page as I didn’t like the image and to have space to move my main sell line. I then straightened all the edges on the main sell line and mast head. Once I had completed that I made the mast head and sell lines smaller to make space to add more sell lines as in my feedback my page looked sparse. After that, I placed the information that goes with the barcode on top again making space for an additional poster

Front pageI then added a circle ontop of mymain sell line to make mypage look fuller. I added a new sell line and added another picture to the shopping section. Once I did that I added a sky line. Meanwhile I organised a new shoot for the sun model to be placed under the sell lines.

Front pageI then placed my sun model where I intended however I didn’t like it so I deleted it and decided to use the images from my content page to create a boy section. Once I had done that I added page numbers so to fill my magazine up however I still had a problem with accidently rubbing out a section of the model.

Front pageTo fill the gap I asked for feedback and someone said I need to include more music references so I added a tours and tickets section to the page.